I finally caught up on it, too. I really enjoyed this! I loved the revelation scene where Tempus dropped Lois into the water and then Clark showed up, etc... That was great!

And Tempus having the tables turned on him -- I agree with what James said about them checking out the island... or maybe just some isolated little tidbit story on an inside page of the Daily Planet about some unfortunate unidentified castaway whose bones were discovered on a deserted island... goofy

And I'm with Tank about what explanation Lois and Clark might come up with for her survival/reappearance... In addition to the Perry-teeth-dropping bit, it'd be interesting to see what exactly four years of back pay amounts to!

I'm casting my vote for a sequel -- I hope you've got more up your sleeve! Thanks for a very enjoyable story.

~Toc


TicAndToc :o)

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