Jenni, not cruel at all.
I do tend to write in detail and try to get everyone's feelings at every angle and on all subjects (especially Lois's feelings as she moves toward understanding and acceptance of Clark as he really is). I write scripts for a living, and in script writing, less is more and you have to cut all details out and keep everything short. Every line and movement has to just say a million things. I use free-form writing as a way to do what I can't do in my other writing. It's liberating for me. I am interested, all the same, to see how people feel about details though, if they think I have too many or they think enough is enough. So thank you for sharing.
I will defintiely re-read my parts and see if it is the way I want this story to read, or if it can all be tightened up or something.
And don't worry about Clark. I will take care of him..
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