Wow, thanks everyone for the terrific response!
Hope that helps.
Yes, AntiK, I loved "And Then There Was Light" (Plug, People, if you haven't read it, you should. Nobody does Clark in pain quite like AntiK. Just finished her "Lethal Qualities" - you should read that too!). It was kind of what inspired me to tackle writing a story from one POV. I did that a little in "Jolly St. Clark", but my new story (the long, dark one) has to be from Lois's POV (mainly because Clark's missing), so bringing him in kind of ruins the mystery (Everyone knows he's missing from the first scene, so it's NOT a spoiler
-- oh, wait, that fits under what Lois doesn't know) and see if I can make it into something people will read twenty parts of (my current estimate).
