Another excellent chapter!
I was very happy that you went back and relived those last few minutes, this time from Lois' pov. It was a riot to follow her thoughts along as she struggled to make sense out of what she was reading.
Loislanitis. That was it. Symptoms: hallucinations, fluttery heartbeat, headaches, shaky limbs, and sudden suspicion that your partner is a Martian.
- Vicki