Thanks for the quick reply, Lara!
Yeah, that's what I was thinking I'd probably do...because I really don't want to scrap everything and start over! I'm actually fairly happy with what I've written so far, which is kind of rare for me, especially this early in a fic haha. I tend to write a lot of inner monologue stuff anyway (maybe too much :p ), so hopefully it'll be pretty clear. I'm fairly sure that Lois is at least still in character, even if it's not quite the way it happened in the episode, so I think it should be okay. (Now all that's left is to get more written so I can start posting, lol)
