What I cut out of "The Circle Game" became two other stories:"Secrets" and "Rite of Passage". I'm currently revisiting "Secrets" and revising the over-the-top thouhts. Perfection, goading and taunting, laughs derisively.
Jude
"Simplify. Simplify." Henry David Thoreau
"To see what is in front of one's nose is a constant struggle." George Orwell