I am amazed by the number of people who post here for whom English is their second language. I wanted to write "Ich spreche kein Deutsch," and I had to look up a couple of the words. (And I'm still not sure I got it right!) But it sounds like some of the problems are with inspiration, not with the language. And, if you'll take advice from a non-writer, remember "Write what you know." Take some aspect of your own life or own experience that is especially meaningful to you and apply it to Lois and Clark. My friends who are writers also set aside a time to write each day. Then get an English-speaking beta who can catch the grammatical errors. And then post!
