hi aiken! welcome to the boards! i'm glad you're here. i've really enjoyed both your stories. you have a very lyrical style, and great use of imagery and symbolism. was a tad disappointed that there was no revelation in superman undone, but other than that, i loved every bit of it.
btw, if you haven't seen it already, i suggest you take a look at
this thread on the
archive message boards. anyway, welcome to these boards. have fun, and post more fic!
Paul