Well, Kathy and Paul have summed it up pretty nicely, but since I'm posting a revised story right now, I thought I'd jump in with a few specifics to futher clarify.
In Playing to Win, I made some major changes. I rearraged two pivotal scenes, altering the tone of much of the story, added 3-4 entirely new scenes and changed a number of other things within scenes. I added about 8 pages plus the rewriting. So while it's not an entirely new story, it's very different that what people read when I posted it earlier. I thought about sending it straight to the archive anyway, but there was some interest in seeing posted, and I felt like it was different enough to merit reposting. Also, a lot of people who commented the first time had made specific suggestions, and I was hoping to engage in a dialogue about the changes I'd made based on those comments.
Annie
