Nan,

I have not been posting fdk as diligently as I should be, but I want you to know I LOVE THIS STORY! (as I love everything you write!)

Maria wrote:
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When you said "the other Superman also rose..." For a moment I was confuse.
Was Clark and the clone or were the two superman?
I have to admit I was confused for a second, too. By saying 'the other Superman also rose', I thought you meant Clark was dressed as Superman. Then, I wondered why he wasn't surprised that Lois had called him "Clark". I had to visualize the actual show and then I remembered that Clark had shown up as Clark, not as Superman.

Perhaps it would be less confusing to use quotes, as in, "Superman" also rose or use some other words such as the imposter also rose or something like that.

Other than this split-second of confusion, the entire section was awesome! Nice job.

- Vicki

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