That poem had me rolling, too.
But then I'm sad that it's over.
Seemed kind of rushed, though. Not that I wanted gratuitous details of Parks' demise, but as it was I had to re-read to figure out that the corpse at the end was him... oh, well. Couldn't have happened to a nicer guy.
Looking forward to the next story... kind of like how a crack addict wants the next hit...
PJ