Yes, what Wendy said... and I also appreciated the humor in this section. The visual of Clark walking on the ceiling, his tie flopping into his face, was just priceless.

Then there's this throw-away line about Lois...

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The whiff of smoke from her kitchen reminded her that she had been cooking dinner.
laugh

Write more -- plot, humor, revelation or not, whatever, just write more!

PJ

"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."

--Stardust, Caroline K