Nice addition.

Just enough agrivation to make the gentle readers want to slap Lois up side the head, yet you've given the next poster an out by having Lois get in touch with Henderson.

I look forward to seeing where someone takes off from here. You've set up various posibilities for the next instalment with Henderson's phone call, Clark's as yet unknown presense, and Lex.

Tank (who hopes the next instalment doesn't take quite as long)