Paul,
Good changes. This satisfies my concerns about Lois being too weak and inconsistent on the bugging. Thanks!
My opinion on killing off major characters is that those typically go under the category of Tank Endings or deathfics. Tank endings generally come as a separate alternative to the main story while deathfics in a round robin should be agreed to ahead of time since one person's effort affects those of all the others that came before in the story. But that's IMO.
[EDIT] It's always OK to kill off the bad guys. And my definition of major character is L or C. It's not really a deathfic, IMO, if the Kents or Perry or Jimmy die since they are supporting characters.
