Wow, I never expected such a positive response! I'm glad you all liked it.
Rivka, I seriously considered Clark flying out to consult you -- I know 11 p.m. isn't all that late for most people -- but I decided that it's my story, so Clark should come consult me. So there. :p
Um, I don't *actually* live in England. My location is listed as Hampshire because that's where Watership Down itself is located, but I've lived in the heart of Geula for over a decade now.
Thanks to all of you for finding this funny.
Hazel
