well, i'm a nutcase, but i liked it.
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jimmy's fate was a bit predictable once you'd set the scene, as was the hair thing... but maybe that says something more about how twisted my mind is than about the story.
frankly, i flashed back to a tiny toons skit involving plucky duck, hampton pig, and a game show called "that's incredibly stupid!" (to get the grand prize, they had to find a needle in a haystack inside a darkened warehouse full of fireworks and such)
anyway, i never saw the jimmy twist coming. that was just great...
of course, the line "we're going to need another timmy!" has special significance for me, but that's another issue.
great job, jill.
Paul
