Whew, Lynn! This is certainly different!
Not sure how I feel about Gillian. My first, immediate impulse was "alt-Lois," which says something about me (even if I don't know what).
The second part, though... I'm not sure if I like her. I surely understand her cynicism, and her insolence is working rather well with Clark, but I don't much care for people who pride themselves on nobody else being as decent or altruistic as they are. Why would she be offended at the idea of Superman going somewhere for a shower?
You've clearly done lots of research, and it shows. You've given us a very real picture, and I can't wait to see more of this!
One final word of warning: since many of the regular fdk suppliers also haunt the nfic folder, you'll find yourself probably getting a smaller fdk folder here. Don't kid yourself into thinking we're not reading, though!
Hazel, looking forward to more in two days
